Jenny

[FagunerAgun]

This story will be posted later.
*This story is only for BanglaCricket Forum.

**All characters here are imaginary.

[FagunerAgun]

Mods, I strived to abridge further. Should this story be too long, please remove.

[Nafi]

Is this your own work?

(havent read it yet)

[cricman]

Before I decide weather to read this, Is this an Erotic Story?

[FagunerAgun]

Originally Posted by Nafi
Is this your own work?

(havent read it yet)

100% my work, even did not have any one to proof read. To understand this story, you may read the other story named Korolla that I wrote and posted in Banglacricket.

[Bancan]

Tl;dr

[Zunaid]

Originally Posted by FagunerAgun
100% my work, even did not have any one to proof read. To understand this story, you may read the other story named Korolla that I wrote and posted in Banglacricket.

I would recommend you proof first and then repost.

[FagunerAgun]

Originally Posted by Zunaid
I would recommend you proof first and then repost.

Well, I wrote this story from my imagination, how can I prove that I wrote it. Any advice? And this is my fourth story that I posted in this forum.
And I am writing more.

[Zunaid]

no, no...

I recommended that you proof it not prove it.

I am sure you wrote it. I was suggesting going over the article with an editing mind to correct any mistakes or errors with an eye to improve readability. Just that.

General suggestions might include:

• Check for grammar issues, especially subject verb agreements and tense
• Simplify long sentences. Makes it easier to read
• Use more current idiomatic phrases
• etc etc etc

And never let anyone stop you from writing.

[FagunerAgun]

You mean proof read...my apologies....that's a good suggestion, I badly need at least one proof reader. even I tried to get my son's teacher to proof read for me, no time, writer's eyes cannot catch all the typos to increase readablity. I tried my best.

Well, this time I will let it go and next time I will get someone to proof read to remove the typos before I post here.

Thanks for your suggestions.

[Naimul_Hd]

holyy smoke !! i should have seen the length of writing before start reading it....now my head is spinning...lol...faguneragun bhai..i will surely finish reading in 3-4 days time.

Btw...Jenny is my best friend's wife !! :p

[Zunaid]

And her phone number is 867-5309, right?

[Naimul_Hd]

^^ ahem ahem....zunaid bhai...ki bolte chan...amar friend er bou' r number ki amar mukhostho thake naki !!!

[Zunaid]

Now, now. I think Tommy Tutone will be upset.

[Naimul_Hd]

^^ Quoting from Wiki :

"The song caused a fad of people dialing 867‒5309 and asking for "Jenny"

No wonder why Zunaid bhai still remembers the phone no.

For this Tommy Tutone once said, "We laughed about it for years" !!

[iDumb]

Originally Posted by cricman
Before I decide weather to read this, Is this an Erotic Story?

Isn't it obvious? An erotic story from FagunerAgun wouldn't last longer than 2 minutes*.








*Here we go with the hate speech (know who you are talking to before you speak...)

[iDumb]

Fag bhai, since you are a story teller - I assume you are very observant and understand the inner complexity of human being specially females.

I have wondered about this question for last 5 years but never got the answer. So tell me fag bhai, why do some girls wear multiple rings on different fingers? what does this mean? Why they trying to confuse us?

[Alchemist]

Great effort FagunerAgun bhai.

The way Sonya changed her personality, after meeting Jenny and David, was a real concern for her parents. This is a true scenario for parents living abraod.

The finishing of the story was a bit like 'Bangla Cinema'. However, I've enjoyed reading it. :-)

[FagunerAgun]

Originally Posted by Alchemist
Great effort FagunerAgun bhai.

The way Sonya changed her personality, after meeting Jenny and David, was a real concern for her parents. This is a true scenario for parents living abraod.

The finishing of the story was a bit like 'Bangla Cinema'. However, I've enjoyed reading it. :-)

Oh thank you, Alchemist bhai for your valued opinions.

Yes, you are absolutley right, Sonya's character is a reminder for lot of us in the West. And it is comig to us.

I shortened this story too much, lost balance here and there. So the ending got this much.....

[bujhee kom]

Very good story, beautifully and very intimately written dearest Helal bhaiya!

[Akib]

Great story man. Very deep and well written.

[FagunerAgun]

Thank you bk and Akib for your encouraging comments.

[auntu]

অসাধারন! লেখায় পরিপক্কতার ছাপ সুস্পষ্ট। মেধা ও মননের সুষম প্রয়োগ।
আরও লেখার প্রতীক্ষায়।

[al Furqaan]

buzlam na...

so at the very end when the grand-daughter Jess is predicted or expected to come back and say "one day i used to live here with my parents..." is that an allusion to Jenny saying the same thing when she first met Jamal?

i.e is this one of those repeat stories, like was Jenny's parents victims of the same tragedy as Sonya and Wendell??

[Nadim]

Usually i don't read long post here but after reading the first paragraph it made me to read the whole story.
Wonderful Piece F_A bro Apnake novel prize deoa dorkar bc theke!